By, Sam
Dear Diary,
Today was a crazy, I said crazy day. It started out with me waking up not in my bed, I was somewhere cold, somewhere blue with white polka dots. I kept looking around I looked down and…
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
There was green stuff and things that seem so close. Then I was like right next to it. It had weird things on it I could see myself in it.
‘’I look hot!’’
Finally, I hit a big thing with pointy things. Then I saw my friend Lilly. We both jumbled down and hit the ground. We were laughing, having a snowball fight. A few hours later I started getting really hot. A bright thing appeared and I was dripping and then I slowly stated to get smaller and smaller until I wasn’t even there.
This is a very good and descriptive story
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A pro would be it is very detailed. A con would be it was a little short and it said awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww like that it was long
Ashton miller
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very funny but could be a little longer
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